The Last Tall Building

Angelic Incomplete #2

Back in 2014 I was going through this hardcore religious phase. To this day, everything I write about is inspired by the Bible in some way. The best story in the ancient text is the story of creation. We all know what it is. In six days God created the world and on the seventh he rested and marveled at his creation. I’ve always wondered how was he able to create man out of water and mud. For a while I even doubted this explanation until it dawned on me that when we die, we return to dust. That was enough evidence I needed to move forward in my spiritual learning. This belief has inspired me to re-create the making of man and his coming together with his mate.

The Last Tall Building was meant to be a short story. I didn’t need an outline becasue I was literally pulling the story out of the Bible but apply my own detail. This was way before I started attending school for Creative Writing so my skills was lacking in describing details.

I dont want my uncompleted works to be lost on my computer. So, here’s the Last Tall Building.


FYI: this short piece will have some errors. I did look over the story before posting it and tried by best to catch anything wrong. Please dont judge the story based off mistakes. 

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